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Review:Pheonix Potioneer says:
Ooh, I like this chapter. I think Albus has it wrong. The Malfoys didn't just change sides, Narcissa Malfoy put her life on the line by telling Voldemort that Harry was dead. That's a big difference.

I don't think Scorpious is up to anything suspicious. Sometimes I go outside in the cold.

Albus is a lot like Harry. They both get obsessed with things easily. Harry got obsessed with Draco Malfoy in his sixth year, and with the Deathly Hallows in his seventh. Now Albus is obsessed on who sent him the swelling solution.

I realized as I was reading this that I forgot to include the flying lesson for my story. So this is a good reminder!

The second chapter of my story is up. :)

Good work on this chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you like this chapter. After chapter 3, it was the one that caused me most trouble. *laughs*

And thanks for letting me know about your story. Looking forward to reading chapter 2.

I didn't think of that similarity between Harry and Albus, but you're right. They are coming at it from slightly different perspectives though in that Albus is more concerned with proving to himself that it's not some Dark Wizard or something.

And yeah, Albus isn't seeing the whole picture with regard to the Malfoys. He's only 11 and only knows about the war from what his dad and others have told him, so all he sees is them changing sides at the last moment and not the fact that they really had very little choice in Deathly Hallows or that Narcissa saved Harry's life. If he knows about that, he'd probably think it was the least she could do after being involved with the organisation that tried to kill him in the first place.

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