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Review:SereneChaos says:
I'm impressed with how well you were able to combine three challenges into one short story. In under 1000 words you managed to write something that's both descriptive and complete-feeling.

I actually don't hate Audrey--I consider myself a nice person, but have also been pushed into meanness by jealousy (maybe not jealous of prettiness, but other things). If anything, I think she's a realistic character, and I like how you left your ending a little ambiguous with whether or not Audrey begins to tell Rita nasty things or not (which I read as, she does). Would I want to be friends with Audrey? Probably not, but she's great to read about here!

Author's Response: I was actually a bit worried about the low word count considering how many prompts I had, so I'm really glad you don't think it's too little or anything.

I suppose you do have a point, actually. She does seem to be more sad and alienated than anything else, looking back - apparently I have no idea while I'm writing while I'm writing it. Hmm. Anyway.

Thank you so much for your lovely review! I really do appreciate it. :)

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