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Review:CherryBoom says:
Hi! I'm here for the review. =)

I really liked that you didn't rush their relationship in this fic. It feels more natural that way, plus considering how mellow Neville is, it's quite likely that their relationship was very easygoing and not filled with drama. You managed to bring out some Neville's qualities in both his parents (losing the boat and Alice's embarrassment) which were really nice details.

What puzzled me was that you didn't give us any clue (apart from the CI) about Frank's appearance. Considering how sparse the descriptions were, you could add some to make this fic more vivid.

There were some misspelled words, but all things considering your writing was smooth and it was enjoyable to read it.

I would have liked to know how Frank managed to break the boat, that storyline was left undiscovered in this fic.

Author's Response: Hello!

Thank you; I always have it in my head that Fralice (that is, Frank/Alice) were very a laid back couple - the couple that everyone wanted to be.

That's a good idea; maybe I'll go through and edit it one day. Thank you for such a good review!

Jasmine, x


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