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Review:MargaretLane says:
Love that part about her looking like Grandma Weasley. It gives us an immediate impression of her stance and her attitude.

*laughs* Draco really did play it down, didn't he? But then how do you tell your son "your grandfather was a major criminal who spent time in prison for hate crimes and when he was jailed, I joined the criminal organisation in his place and nearly killed Rose's father by accident when I was trying to kill a hero of the wizarding world." *laughs* That would be an interesting conversation.

I'm pretty interested to find out what houses they are in. I'm guessing Scorpius will end up somewhere that isn't Slytherin. Maybe all three will end up in Gryffindor.

Love the part about her tumbling to the floor. It adds a bit of commonplace reality to your story.

One slightly confusing line: "as Scorpius pulled me to her feet." I'm assuming it should be "as Scorpius pulled me to my feet".

I also like the way you finish up the chapter. It kind of shows Rose's immediate reaction to Hogwarts.

Author's Response: Hey, sorry this is late.
Ha, yeah Draco played it down but I think it would be difficult to tell your 11 year old that. Yeah it should be, thanks for telling me.
Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you liked the ending! :)


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