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Review:MargaretLane says:
Really like the fact that you decided to make this more than a one-shot. Chapter 1 left so many questions unanswered, like whether Draco has changed and realised the error of his ways, whether he and Hermione will meet up and whether Hermione and Ron will ever come to an agreement about this issue. And I guess whether Rose will ever find out too.

I think there might be a mistake in this. You've said Hugo waited for her to follow him onto the train. I presume that's Albus.

You also have "you mum and dad", when it should be "your mum and dad".

I think it is interesting that you have Harry and Draco friends now. It does make sense since Draco really owes Harry one for saving his life and we got the impression in the final two books that Harry had some sympathy for what Draco was going through and understood that he'd been pretty much brainwashed and didn't have much choice about some of his actions.

I'd love to see him give a proper apology. Not just "I'm sorry I used a slur. I didn't realise how bad it was," but "my attitudes towards so many things when I was a teen was appalling. I was brought up with those views, but that's no excuse. I respect you completely now and realise that who your parents are has nothing to do with how good a witch you are." But I guess we're nineteen years later now, so more likely, that apology was made YEARS ago or at least implied. Actions speak louder than words after all, so just treating Muggleborns and werewolves and house-elves and so on as equals says far more than an apology was. And I guess we can assume he now does that or I don't suppose Harry would be his friend.

Hmm, quite an intriguing ending. I'm guessing Rose and Albus will end up befriending Scorpius, which is one thing that could well change Ron's opinion of Draco, if he gets to know him as the man he is now and the father of his daughter's friend, rather than who he was at the age of 17.

Author's Response: Hey, sorry that this is late.
Yeah, I need to go change that and thanks for pointing out the other thing. Yeah, I thought it would be more realistic that Harry was on better terms with Draco and not totally hating him.
Thanks for reviewing! :)


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