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Review:Rose Wilts says:
Hey there! It's only me!

This is such a great first chapter - it definitely reads much smoother now that you've fixed those tense issues. It's funny and engaging and heads straight into the action, which is always a good thing. I don't know if I've mentioned this to you, but I think you've already have some really well characterised people in this chapter - so you don't need to be worried about that. Keep going in this direction and everything will be fantastic! Everyone seems really canon, but also entertaining and interesting. So well done!

That's about all I have to say for this chapter, but great stuff! Really well done :) x

Author's Response: Hi!!

First of all, thank you for beta'ing for me!

This is really great feedback, thank you so much! It's so good to read that :D

Thank you :) x

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