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Review:Faith100z says:
Hi there! So, I thought this was really cute. The progression is clear and we see how Ron slowly falls in love with Hermione. I especially liked the Viktor Krum bit :)

I noticed one little spelling thing: "but he thinks her as his close friend now." I'm assuming you meant to put "of" between "thinks her"? :)

I would have loved a tad more elaboration about Ron's feelings, particularily why he felt that way. Does that make sense? Haha, I'm not very eloquent today.

Overall, a really nice read! Good job!

Author's Response: Ahaha I liked the Viktor Krum bit as well, it's very... Ron? :p

The "but he thinks her as his close friend now" is actually grammatically correct. It's kind of another version of saying that, I dunno, English is strange. It's more of a posh-y way of saying it, I guess? :p

More feelings from Ron? But he's a teaspoon! xD ahahaha no I get where you're coming from, I might add that in, I just don't really have time to edit/write things right now. :/

Thank you for reviewing! :D

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