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Review:CambAngst says:
Hello, there! Sorry it's been a while since I've been by to read and review. Hopefully I can make up for frequency with quality. ;)

This was a great chapter, plot-wise. I felt like the story is really starting to come together, especially from Katherine's point of view. The confrontation with her father was chilling. He didn't seem like he was planning to take no for an answer until Pierre showed up.

Then it seemed like the two men fought. Or at least argued quite vehemently about Katherine's future. Given the timing of these events, I have a bad feeling about Pierre's future prospects now that he's made Thorfinn angry. Voldemort should be rebuilding his followers right around this point, and the Death Eaters were escalating their campaign of terror. Not a good time to be antagonizing them.

Another piece of the puzzle finally slides into place for Katherine! I still feel like we're going to learn that Thorfinn wasn't really her father. Whether it turns out to be Egil or Pierre or Fabian... well, that's part of what's keeping me reading. I'm really looking forward to her visit with the Weasley's. I think she's going to discover some things.

I'm sure it won't come as news to you that your writing was pretty rough in this chapter. I saw lots of typos and they made the story kind of hard to follow in a few places. Hopefully you can get it cleaned up, because otherwise, this chapter was great!

Author's Response: I haven't responded to your review, I'm sooo sorry for the late response, but I left your review so it would serve me as a reminder to edit this chapter along with others. You have no idea, how much help your reviews are. They always give me something to think about :)



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