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Review:ohmymerlin says:


I love reading about James II and now that you've written about him just makes it that much better! :D

I really want to know why Fred got the bruises! Was it Denny?! Was it not?! That is the question!

I'm very sorry, I'm in a very odd mood today! :D

Anyway, I loved the telepathic conversation between James and Michelle! :D It was adorable! :D

Also, what is Lenny's full name? Or is that her full name? Or is Leonarda? Leonardriette? Okay feel free to ignore me! :p

The only thing that I thought was a bit off. "He loved James brotherly". I think it should read "He loved James like a brother" or "He loved James dearly". It's just a suggestion though! It just felt a bit 'off' when I read it.

Anyway, I can't wait to read more of your work! I think the its the Avengers cross-over next!


So, I really liked this! I'll be adding to my favourites and I can't wait to read more! :D

Author's Response: YAY! Another review from one of my most favorite people in the world! Huzzah! *happy dance*

Anywho, I'm really glad that you liked what I've written so far about James II. I wanted to give myself another go with Next Gen, because the first story I wrote about them was just pure awful, so I went ahead and deleted it a long time ago. I'm glad to see take two is working just fine.

And yes, Fred did get the bruises from Denny. She isn't exactly the sweetest of girls, and she does have a really bad temper, as in BAD but I'll let you see for yourself later on.

And yesh, the telepathic conversation between husband and wife. It's an intriguing concept really. It's strange because sometimes I'll see couples just staring at eachother making faces and they know exactly what's going on in the other's head. But yesh, they are an adorable couple!

And why would I ignore you? You're too awesome to ignore! Lenny's full name is Leanne.

As for the part that seemed a bit off, I know what you mean. I have no clue why that sounded good to me when I typed this up. I'll fix it once I get chapter images going and such. But yeah. I guess I was feeling in the mood of weirding things up and combining "like a brother" and "dearly". Don't ask. It's...odd. I used to love screwing with my English teachers in the past by writing this essay that they thought was really good until they read towards the end where I'll jack it up on purpose just to see how they react. I don't do it anymore, but sometimes old habits die hard. But yes, I'll definately fix that.

Thank you so much for your reviews so far! They mean so much to me, and I can't wait until you read the Avengers crossover of mine. They still need a lot of cleaning up to do, but I hope you'll enjoy them all the same. Hopefully they won't be a let down. Can't wait to see ya' around for that! :D

Much love,


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