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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Review Tag! :D

This was really sweet! Remus and Tonks are a great pairing! :D

There was one error, you said, "...and my heart stoped", it's probably just a typo but I just thought I'd mention it. :)

Also, I find it quite strange that she could feel Ginny's tears on her cheeks and that she could feel her hand being taken away from Remus' and she knew she was being lifted up. I mean, if she was looking at it, it might have been a bit different... but I don't know anything about death, so feel free to ignore me! :p

I also loved the ending.

"What took you so long?" I asked curiously.
"Long story."
"We have forever."

That was really sweet!

Anyway, that one-shot was really good, I really enjoyed reading it! :D

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

It was a little typo thank you!

The whole point was that a normal person may not be able to feel that but I made it appear that Tonk's eyes had just closed so she could feel everything rather than her just dying.

I'm glad you liked the ending.

Thank you

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