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Review:javct says:
Is the father Scorpius? Is the father Scorpius?! *is guessing he's the father until proven otherwise (which I probably will be in the next chapter :P*)

This was really good. I enjoyed the way that you didn't mention the father's name in the first chapter; keeping the reader guessing (as you can see by guessing).

This story can be set apart from other teen-pregnancy fics because this chapter, unlike others, keeps us guessing: who is the father? why is she pregnant? how will Ron and Hermione react?

Gosh, I can't wait to read Ron and Hermione finding out she's pregnant.
Summer, this is really good and I can't wait to see what happens next!
I will be watching this story and will wait for chapter three

Jasmine, x

Author's Response: Haha you can keep guessing but I may not reveal for a while!

The father's name is going to come out in rather a spectacular fashion as it is going to cause a lot of pain to a fair few of the characters here. I do want to keep people guessing for as long as possible.

Chapter 3 will be up very soon!


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