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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
This is so intense and so angsty that I can't help but love it! I've read quite a few of your things and I must say I have never been disappointed with what I've found!

This story is a rarity on HPFF because it focuses on quite a strange relationship which isn't explored often. I love the idea of Gellert and Ariana though as it adds an extra dynamic to her death where as Gellert is seemed not to be heartless but he is as tourtured as we saw Albus to be about her death.

I felt like I was in the prison cell beside Gellert when you were explaining everything that went on. It was so realistic and I could almost imagine him crying out in some form of pain as he remembered his beloved Ariana.

The line about her being murdered by either her brother or her lover was heartbreaking :( I also think it was made amazingly better by mentioning what she'd been wearing and emphasising her childishness which made her death seem to be more of a disaster.

The flashback as well was amazing as it helped us see the context and as you've mentioned this is a novel I can see you going into the whole reason for their relationship which I think you will do brilliantly at!

I also wonder why they all knew he was there... did something happen or was Esmerelda just a gossip? I wonder!

Author's Response: ANGST FTW! Thank you! * secretly fan-girling*

The unexplored relationships are usually the best (in my opinion at least) because it gives the author more leg-room and less cliche's (which is a rare gem when it comes to writing fan fiction).

Thank you so much! This review really made me smile :D Esmerelda was just a gossip I'm afraid; nothing sinister there (this will play a rather large role in chapters to comes)
Jasmine, x


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