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Review:EverDiggory says:
Hey it's Ever here with your requested review!

I really love this. You're such a talented writer! I do love this!

Hannah/Neville is my cup of tea so I was really excited! The plot was fantastic!

The only thing I would really point out is the lack of imagery and sometimes you paragraphs get absolutely huge!

Otherwise I think everything's up to par!

xx

Ever

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Thank you for the compliment! It honestly makes my day to get reviews like this so thank you from the bottom of my heart!

I love Neville/Hannah too! I am really excited to continue with this story and see where it takes me because exploring their relationship is causing me to see the books in a fascinating, new way.

Thank you for the constructive criticism, as well! I am a rambler when I talk so I often write really long paragraphs plus I'm not always sure when and where to break them off, but I'll definitely work on it! Imagery is something that I love when reading but that I sometimes find tedious in writing so I should definitely play around with it more to learn how I could use it to improve my writing.

Again, thank you!


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