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Review:Remus says:
Mwahaha! I'm back for more! All day yesterday I was wondering about this story so now that I have time, I'm going to review a few more chapters. XD

The first thing I noticed about this chapter is the narrative feels a lot better. More description about what is going on, emotions. I can easily picture Dimitri chilling out in his bedroom while listening to Hugo's ipod. Haha! Great, great improvement!

I really liked the werewolf part! Donovan I'm guessing is the Alpha here.

Wha! Is Grayback alive here? Things just got interesting. For some odd reason I thought he would be dead or in Azkaban for being part of Voldemort's army. However, it just adds another layer to this mystery!

The only 'concern' I have is that you use semi-colons way too much. Haha, it almost feels like a semi-colon abuse. But other than that, grammar wise, everything is great.

Now for the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Donovan is the second in commend. Their Alpha is not there yet, but most of them still consider him to be the Alpha.

I always think that Greyback ended up in Azkaban, and that's where he is now. Don goes to see him and tell him about the pack and what's going on. More on that soon enough... ;)

Thank you so much for your reviews and your CCs.

Sam.


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