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Review:ohmymerlin says:
I ADORED this chapter! It was wonderful! :D

I love the way you write Quidditch, I feel like I'm up there with him (although I'd be a lot less coordinated! :p) and I love the detail that you put in it! :D

Also, I still love James and Lily's sibling love! ♥ It's the most adorable brother/sister combination out! :D

I really hope that James gets in the squad, he really deserves it, he's such a good spirit! :D

I still want to know what the Harry/James conflict is! And I want to know if there's something wrong with Carlotta, I was skimming through some of the older chapters and I began to grow suspicious.

*shifty eyes.*

Anyway, I can't wait to see if he got in! Hint, hint, nudge, nudge. Ah but you update quite well, I shouldn't be complaining! I'm being a little greedy! :p I can't help that your stories are SO amazing and I can't get enough out of them! :D

infinity/10! ;D

Author's Response: So far, the Quidditch is proving easier to write when James is playing. James as a spectator isn't that interested for very long anyway, and it's harder to write it from the stands. I always used to wish we had more Quidditch in the books, and I wondered why JK seemed to struggle with the matches - and now I see why! So I'm very glad that they come off well in the end :)

You will have a lot of questions answered within the next couple of chapters - specifically James' immediate Quidditch-playing future and his conflict with Harry. Unfortunately I think it may be a couple of weeks before I can update this again, because my priority now is to complete Frozen, but I will update this again as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing, it's much appreciated as always :)

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