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Review:coolsilver says:
Well. Dang. (I used a different D word, before deciding that the mods might report and remove this review. So I played it safe, haha.)
Throughout that last scene, those few paragraphs, I'm going, "oh god, oh god, oh crap. Oh KAT!", and you WROTE IT SO PERFECTLY TOO.
These lines: "I've been waiting for this moment for years. And it's so oddly perfect, but so imperfect and wet and slimy, but so desperate and we need it and I can't let go."
"I don't know how long we're kissing, but I know it's for a long time. I don't care, I don't care. I just want him. I just want Albus. And I'm crying, and the tears and mixing with the rain but I don't care because Albus is kissing me and he wants me and I don't know why I'm crying anymore."
The run ons, the multiple ands, Kat's desperation and singlemindedness, the descriptions? It worked. It was beautiful, and I felt it.
Loved it.

Author's Response: Haha! Good one you- I get you ;)

THANK YOU! This chapter was really quite hard to write for some reason- I knew exactly what I wanted to put, but it was impossible to put it into words D: But I've got really positive feeback, so thank you so much- your comments really mean a lot to me.

I wanted those run-ons because I think it sort of encapsulates the moment- it's not short and snappy, it's long and confusing. I'm really glad they worked- I was worried about them :D

Anyways, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It means a lot :)

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