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Review:EverDiggory says:
Hey Rosie! I really, really enjoy this story! Its so unique!

I understand you were worried about Snape and Lily's characterization, but I don't see why! I think you had a fairly strong grasp on your characters and it definitely showed!

About the imagery, I think you had a pretty solid amount but I think there could be room for more. I may be over critical sometimes but I really do think a little more never hurt anyone!

I didn't see any grammar/spelling errors, as I expected so thats always good!

The plot is still as interesting as ever! You've intrigued me and I'm very anxious to read more!

xx

Ever

Author's Response: Hey ever!

Haha, well I'm happy that you think that Snape and Lily's characterization was fine. I was honestly worried since I've never deal with them. There's another character that is coming up soon that it'll be fun to explore. However, shh...spoilers! Hahaha!

Hmm...I might do another read through and see if I can add a bit more of imagery. I was worried the most on the whole James and Snape's fight scene not having enough...but yeah, I'll read through it again.

Thank you so much for reviewing, Ever! And so sorry for the delay!

Until next time

--Rosie

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