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Review:darkkid says:
This is, by far, one of the best stories I've read in a while. Very well written, thought out, and put together so smoothly.

I'm really intrigued by the metamorphosis - princess to queen - theme and how you managed to capture it so perfectly with the changing of the seasons too. It ties in together so well.

And your use of descriptive words is amazing. A lot of people overdo it, but you added just enough to make the settings clear. It was easy to imagine each scene in my mind, and I love that.

What I love most is that, even though you were inspired by the Grimm fairy tale, you still managed to make this story original.

An excellent story! Definitely enjoyed it! :D

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! That means a lot to me!

I'm glad you liked witnessing Eileen's transformation and how it occurred alongside the changing of the seasons. Snow and winter were powerful and inspirational metaphors for me, and it was interesting to play with them and use the darkness of the theme to taint their meaning.

Oh, good! I was a little worried with this abstract piece that I'd gone too heavy with the metaphors and description. It's great that you felt like it was balanced and added to the story appropriately. I'm also glad you found this original; I strive for that with all my work :)

Thanks again for this wonderful review!

Amanda


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