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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Back again! I'm sorry that I immediately come back to this yesterday but I was busy and tired and just plain mush. (I'm sick) Anyway! We're back with the girls and I really enjoyed how you started this chapter, we really got a sense of who Rowena was with it. She doesn't seem particularly kind either and I was really worried about how she would receive the girls, especially Bea (I can't blame her for burying that hideous brooch) and I know that its not easy for the girls at all.
Once again though I really loved all of the sisters and how they were interacting. The play on all of their personalities was very entertaining and I just love Bea! She's hilarious and I can't blame her for wanting Rowena to leave. -_-
I'm curious to see how Dezzy's relationship with Godric spans out and its funny that everyone is dressing up their talks with romance and flowers and elopements. Hahha. Girls. :D
I'm not sure if Rowena would approve of course but I think you're going to put that in somewhere in the future chapters right? :D Hopefully? And Salazar! When are we going to see that creepy bloke again? I'm wondering about that while they'll be suffering with Rowena and her stuffy haughtiness!
I didn't see any grammar things and I really liked your pacing and flow, it was really easy to follow and didn't branch off topic or into other areas that weren't important to the chapter just then. :) Very great read and I'm really excited for more! Inform me immediately!
Uhm, like I said on the forums, expect Albus later today or tomorrow and after that its Abandon! So, until then I'll be looking forward to more of your work! Darcy and Louis? Hehehe.
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello Gabbie!
I'm finally getting a free moment to answer your lovely reviews! Woohoo!
I loved writing Rowena. I picture as very tall and stately, and the fact that she has a colder disposition also adds to that. She's ver no-nonsense as you can probably tell!
I ADORED writing the sisters in this chapter!!! They all have such different personalities, and so sometimes they clash, and it's funny to see how they react to each other. Also, while I was writing this chapter I learned that Ettie was definitely the drama queen of the family! She can be worse than Bea! Haha.
Don't you worry about Godric! He'll be back, and Rowena will have quite a strong reaction to him. And Salazar will be back soon, too! Probably in the next chapter, so get excited to see him again!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!!
Cassie :)

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