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Review:MargaretLane says:
Right at the beginning of this chapter, you've said "Laurentis officiall became Minister," leaving off the "y" at the end of "officially".

OK, her reforms are creepy. Reinstating the Dementors is obviously creepy and while the evaluation of the Hogwarts teachers isn't necessarily a bad idea in and of itself, it's creepily reminiscent of Umbridge and anything she did is a bad idea to repeat by definition.

*grins at Slughorn planning on retiring* I've had him say he's planning on doing so in the story I'm writing at the moment too. Looks like there might be a new professor in your year 5 after all. I was wondering if Albus might finally get a year with no new teachers because nobody seemed particularly likely to leave at the end of this.

Oh gosh, that's a mean prank.

Rose should be so lucky - getting John and Kaden to get good marks.

I'd forgotten about Elsie. I still wonder what she knows and if they'll get it out of her by the end of the year. Maybe even by the end of this chapter. I wonder if she'll be nervous-surrounded by 3rd and 4th years.

I am also pretty interested to know what Malfoy's up to. The school year is so close to an end and yet there is so much still to find out. That's assuming we will find it all out in this story. Of course, some of it might be continued on into year 5 or beyond.

One other slight mistake I noticed. You said "Albus was "sept up in the crowd". I assume up mean "swept up in the crowd."

Hmm, the death of Lucius Malfoy has to be significant in some way or why would you mention it? But I can't figure out WHY? Unless you are just trying to get sympathy for Malfoy, but I've a suspicion you've some greater reason.

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