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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
Hope you've enjoyed it?
What a cliffhanger too - you better update soon...
*threatening growl*
Suspense and tension is a theme through out the whole story, obviously with a mixture of emotions that adds to the whole element of confusion of Severus (wow sorry long puzzling sentence.)
I love the way you portray Snape in this piece; you have brilliant character development and the way he deals with Beth really adds depth to his character :)
I love love love love love love the level of description to each sentence, paragraph, chapter, it just makes it so real and awesome!!
I love the dialogue between the death eaters, I know, it's random, but it's so well written and just the way Rowling would've written it :D
I also like the way you write and describe the way Dumbldore and Snape deal with each other, how they don't know what to think of each other almost.
Please keep updating - this story is just so awesome :D

Author's Response: I'm so, so happy to see you by this story! :3 And to hear that you've enjoyed it, too -- that just really makes me excited, especially because it's THIS particular story. I've been working on these books for nearly a year and a half now, and am ridiculously invested in them; they're like my children now!

Snape is one of my very favorite characters to write, and getting to include him here, in this particular era, has been a blast. I wanted from the very first to give him a girl enough like Lily to make him notice her in the first place, but different enough to really challenge him, and I hope that's what I've accomplished here. My writer's bias is inclined to think that he and Beth do make a very good match!

Death Eater dialogue is actually one of the trickier points of writing, especially in scenes like this, so your compliment on it is totally appreciated. :) Just the way Rowling would have done it?! I wish you could see the smile on my face right now! ♥ And I love the way you described the Dumbledore/Snape aspect, because I think it's very apt: They really /don't/ know what to make of each other.

Gahh. This review just totally, totally, totally made my day!! I've just posted chapter 22, and you'll definitely be getting updates every Sunday until the book finishes (chapter 34) unless stated otherwise. I can't stop writing this story to save my life! :3 Thank you so much for reviewing!!

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