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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
WOOP WOOP!! :D
So I'm reviewing all the chapters vbackwards and higgeldy piggeldy, I know, I'm weird like that and even though I've read this story countless times I thought I'd leave you a review anyway ;)
Loving the chapter title and you got Ron and Hermiones relationship captured nicely.
I also liked the attention to detail about Fleur and Ginny - the way they connnected through bereavement and the whole brother back story was very original as well as the miscarriage :D
The way Ron is drunk is very realistic of his behaviour; he is portrayed the same way through the books and the dialogue you use for each character is spot on - Rowling's is similar.
The last chapter is relateable with a neat twist that I thought finished the chapter with a positive upbeat and sweet touch after the sensitive topics you touched down on then; the flirting and relationships were a good contrast as well in comparison to the sad start to the story.
I'm liking the way each chapter has a different message and point of view - it's what makes this story stand tall above the others.
It also means the reader won't be bored and can carry on reading something vaguely fresh each time with a mini-plot along the same familiar story line.
You did it again Val 10/10 :)

Author's Response: You have the most amazing expressions ever - higgeldy piggeldy? ;)

Rowling's is similar? *faints with a dull thud*

SO MANY FEELS

I owe you big time. Sophie the hex-maker?I think yes.


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