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Review:kandekisses says:
OMG.

I should have known James would be sitting in her house waiting for her. Poor Amelia! Hmm.. I didn't know they've only been separated for 3 months. I wonder how long they've been married?


Those two together are something else. It's just so funny to see them interact although I know there is hidden pain there. The feel for this story is actually reminding me of The Proposal with Sandra Bullock for some odd reason lol

James really is a fool for not telling anybody and hiding out at the Leaky Cauldron. I can just imagine how things will turn out. This story is a really nice change from what I'm used to seeing on here. &Nothing caught my eye to edit this chapter.

Great job so far! I really want to read the rest now lol. &I do think I will =)

Author's Response: Yep poor Amelia, James coming in and eating all of her food :D Yep three months, it's not that long.
I'm so glad that you can see their hidden pain, you don't know how much having you say that means to me, I was so worried I wasn't getting across their pain towards each other. I've never actually seen that film, but there is a part later on based on a random scene from it (my friend showed me a random scene when I went over to hers and I thought I would have that in the story somewhere) I should watch it.
Oh yeah James is a big fool, I'm so glad that you have enjoyed this story and I really hope you do continue reading this, I love having you review :-D
Thank you so much again


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