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Review:kandekisses says:
Hey there hun!

Well I must say that was an interesting first chapter.

I really laughed out loud when Amelia was reading the book and getting to a good part when suddenly interrupted. That is very relatable because seriously that always seems to happen!

I liked your introduction to Amelia already. She seems like a funny caring person. And James was just hilarious with the dashing person he is. You can tell they really care about each other. I wonder what went wrong in the marriage though.

A couple things stuck out to me while reading. The first was when you said "Amelia thought it looked like he had wind." and "Meet me at mine tonight". I had to re read those a couple times. It could be that I'm just not used to sayings like that lol

All in all it was very nicely done. So much in fact that I have to read the next chapter to see how James begs and Amelia begrudgingly says yes =)

Author's Response: I'm so sorry it's taken me nearly a week to respond to this!
I'm glad that you find that relatable, I always have that happen to me as well :-D
I'm glad that you liked James and Amelia, they do care about each other but sadly something happened to drive a wedge between them, I hope you continue reading to find out :-p
Haha, sorry I'll have a look at those and see how I can reword them :-D
Thank you so much for taking the time out to read my story and review :-D And yay so glad you want to read the next chapter :-D

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