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Review:No_oneKnows says:
This first chapter is very interesting. It doesn't give away pretty much anything about the plot and it leaves the reader wanting to know what on earth is going on and why they aren't at Hogwarts! I also really enjoyed the way you wrote each perspective. It was a bit confusing at first because I was expecting it to be a girl's perspective throughout the entire story, but then I realised what was happening pretty quickly :)

I honestly love how you haven't told us who their names until the very end. To be honest, I still don't know who's who but I really like that about it! Also, the way you've included Mr. McKinley's perspective is another good idea!

Good job with your first chapter! :D

Author's Response: Aw, thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked that aspect of it. :) Haha, which POV did you like most? (My personal favorite is Gavin...)

Well, fourth chapter's gonna be up soon, and I hope you liked the fanfiction enough to read the new chapter when it's validated! :)

Thanks again,

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