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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
The whole time I read this I wanted to shout out that it wasn't Sirius it was Peter! And then still shake my head at Sirius for thinking the traitor would be Remus.

But mostly the 'you've got the wrong traitor' bit.

I found this chapter rather sad; Wolf has no pack, both he and Remus are alone. I loved the message at the end; that Remus would leave that for Harry. We know Harry reads that plaque.

I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm really excited now.

Sam.

Author's Response: Hahaha! Yeah, this is a moment when it comes to Marauders fics that everyone wants to tell Sirius that the traitor isn't Remus but Peter. However, if we want to keep it as close to canon, then we need to stay with the whole 'Remus is the traitor' bit.

This is indeed a sad chapter and that was my goal. I wanted to show that Wolf had a pack and just as easily as he got it, he lost it. He's in a very dark place now and will be that way for a long time until the next chapter! Haha! You'll see!

Thank you so much for this review! After I'm done answering to all the reviews I'll be sure to drop by once again and continue reading your fic!

Until next time!

--Rosie

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