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Review:Remus says:
Back once more!

I'm not sure what to think of this Dimitri guy! Haha, is he one of the good guys, bad guys or does he have his own agenda of sorts? I really like how you made Hugo be confused as to what happened. Otherwise it would feel too Mary-Stu in my eyes. Its natural for someone to forget things right after the accident and slowly recollect the memories so the reaction felt very real to me.

Now the plot is starting to open up a little bit. And I still have questions! Haha! Which is good! I love it when authors slowly reveal the plot instead of giving it to us right off the bat. Takes the mystery behind things.

"Weasley?" he asked. Hugo nodded, confirming. "As in Harry Potter's nephew, Hugo Weasley. Ron Weasley's son." --How did he know that he was Ron's son? There are many Weasley children who are nephews to Harry.

Couple of things:
He found Ted sat on the couch--Sat to 'Sitting'

Higo remembered what Dimitri had told him-- Higo to Hugo. Small typo, happens to everyone.

Other than that, this was a great chapter! Now I want to know if he's going to tell Teddy!

--Rosie

Author's Response: Dimitri is complicated. He doesn't know what to do right now. He's the type to look after himself first, you could say, but who knows what'll happen? ;)

Dimitri knew he was Ron's son because off all the whispers he told Hugo he heard about him; he knows. More on those whispers soon enough. He heard that he was the Auror, Ron Weasley's, son and then knew that made him Harry Potter's nephew. It's not about Harry this time. :)

I've changed those mistakes.

Thank you so much for reviewing.

Sam.


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