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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here from the forums! :D

This was definitely interesting. I've never really read a fic that centers around Vampires and Werewolves due to my dislike of Twilight but I figured I need to get over it due to the fact that not every Vampire/Werewolf story is like that. :)

Anyway! You definitely managed to build a bit of suspense. I know that this is just the first chapter but it would've been more suspenseful if you had added more details about the night. More to the creepiness factor. Does that make sense? O.o However, the narrative is great. You managed to pull me right into the story making me want to know what was going to happen to Hugo.

What I really like about this chapter is the switch of the POV! I wasn't expecting it and it added an extra layer of what was going on. And man, he just kills the werewolf, doesn't he? I'm guessing that he's a vampire, correct?

And poor Hugo! He doesn't think of anything. Doesn't panic and doesn't ask for help. It feels like he knew what happened to him and there's nothing to change his fate. Now I have lots of questions! Haha, better keep reading then!

Interesting start! On to chapter 2 :D

Author's Response: Hey. Finally able to answer your reviews. So sorry it's taken so long.

I understand that. My dislike of Twilight is why I was unsure about writing this, but I love vampires and werewolves and, thanks to my OF, I have my own versions of them. So I went for it anyway. :)

I'm glad you like the change in POV, I was unsure about that, but there are quite a few changes from a few characters, so it's needed. Yeah, he's a vampire and he just killed the werewolf. He had to, kill or be killed and all. :_

Hugo was losing blood and consciousness; I don't think he could ask if he wanted to. But, yay, questions. I love when people have questions.

Thank you for reviewing.

Sam.

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