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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Hey, it's SamMalfoy93 with your challenge review prize. I'm sorry it's taken so long, free time kind of left me.

This is a really great start to this story. I'm already loving Jennifer; the way she holds her own with Lily in the dorm and is honest, the way she is loyal to James but recognizes that he can be an idiot. She seems like a very loyal character and I look forward to reading more of her.

I enjoyed reading the points of view from both Jennifer and Sirus, giving different insights into situations. And I'm not sure I like Lily's character at the moment. I love Lily in general, but she was rude in defending Severus, when it seemed he started it.

I'll be back here soon. I enjoyed reading this and I look forward to knowing more about the characters. :)

Sam.

Author's Response: awww thanks for this review! (:
im glad that you like Jennifer! She's going to have very interesting character development.
I'm glad that the different points of view is good becuase I was worried that it would be too much.
awww Lily~ I feel like Lily deserves to be a far more complicated character than the Mary Sue that a lot of people portray her to be so I want to write her as more of an actual person, and we do know that Lily is very loyal as well.
Thanks so much for everything! (:


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