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Review:StormThief17 says:
Awww they are so cute! James and Lily make me so warm and fuzzy. I loved seeing so much of them here. You also managed to do a lot with them but without completely neglecting the wider plot so that was good. Not going to lie, I sort of saw the attack coming, but it was still pretty suspenseful wondering what exactly would result from James and Lily's messup. Great chapter! One minor error is but she could Sirius wasn’t having any of it. you need something like but she could see, or she could tell. Also, congrats on winning the dobby!

Author's Response: Hi StormThief! Thank you so much for coming to read and review. :)

Totally know what you mean about the warm and fuzzy feeling. :D I definitely got that when I was writing this chapter, which was fun! I'm glad you enjoyed that part of the chapter, and the way that I worked it into the bigger plot.

I'm not too surprised that you sensed something was off in that scene. James did too, but then, because he's James, he got all distracted by Lily's Patronus. :P

Thank you for pointing out that error--you're definitely right that something is missing there!

And thank you also (I feel so repetitive, haha) for the congratulations! It's a kind of crazy feeling...one of those things you always secretly hope for, but never really think will happen. I really appreciated your nomination in the Best Romance category, as well.

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