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Review:GrangerDanger76 says:
Hey there itís GrangerDanger76 for Team Blue!

Iím going to sorta review as I read; because thatís always fun :)

Here we go.

Okay. Stop. First of all, this opening is wonderful.

Love the description, it sent chills down my arms!

Oh god. Oh god, stop. This is a Sirius story?
Just take my body awayÖ Iím dead.

I really love the characterization of all the characters, all very unique.

You have such a lovely style of writing, I adore this story.

The plot is really unique; I havenít read anything like it :)

A discrepancy!

Oh Goodness.
"It is the first time Orion has ever called him Ďfatherí. He suspects it will not be the last."

That gave me chills. I donít even know why, it was just really well written. I applaud you.
WELL DONE!

Author's Response: Hey there! :) Thanks for stopping by!

Thanks for that - writing the opening was difficult, I have to admit. I re-wrote it a few times, trying to decide when to open it. Before or after? In the end, it came out like that. I'm glad you liked it!

Haha, yeah, Sirius is in it ;) Don't die just yet - he'll be in it a bit more later on, lol.

Thank you so much! It was such a pain working out who would have what sort of 'role' in the family and how that would fit in with what (little) we know of them in canon. I'm so happy you liked them all, though - even if they're not hugely likeable people, lol.

A discrepancy... yes, hold onto that thought ;)

Haha, thanks! It was intended to be a bit foreboding... good things are not about to happen, definitely not.

Thank you so much for this review - it was really nice to receive it and great fun to read!

Aph xx


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