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Review:Danosycatwith7livesleft says:
Hahahaa, Oh my gosh I actually laughed while reading this, I think it is a very good original idea and I love the characters you chose to use.
Top marks for originality.
But in the next chapter or so, I think it would be a good idea to maybe, (just a little bit of advice, feel free to ignore me :)), to do the chapters from different points of view, or maybe a different character per character.
This will give you a chance to explore their thoughts and their feelings and go more into depth, while this was good, I feel you could've gone deeper.
I think I suck at this critism thingy...
Anyway, my main point is that I loved this and I will be watching out for it :D

Author's Response: I actually hoped for this to be funny, so thanks!
This is a one-shot, so no next chapter, but I might write a short story sequel! Maybe, who knows? :D

Thanks for the lovely review,
Keep reading!

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