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Review:Gobsmacked says:
Awwh! They're soo cute.
I thought the story was going to be really long and slow truthfully because of the narrative pace, but i planned to stick to it. I feel like the story is ending a little abruptly but i'm all for epilogues! As long as they involve babies and marriages, lol. But this was/is a good story line, just wish it was 'faster' and had more plot? Heyy, you write better than i would have, haha ;)

Author's Response: Yes, I do understand how slow the story started out and I understand why you might be feeling it ended abruptly but I felt like I was kind of dragging out the story too much and it just needed to end. I hope the epilogue wrapped everything up for you. Not sure if I agree about this story not having any plot because by the end I felt like I had so many plot strings to tie up, but I get where you're coming from. So happy you liked the story though and thanks for reviewing :)

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