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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I'm back! I should have come back sooner and I'm really sorry but I came back on a really good chapter about a Sorting! I always love reading NG's because the way Albus gets Sorted is different for everyone and its always really interesting to see what everyone does. Anyway, I like the feel that you had going for this chapter, it was rather light until someone was talking about Professor Jackson going missing! What's up with that?! Interesting little plot twist there, that's not something I was expecting and also, I love that you put Albus and his friends together. I'm curious to see how they all get on in Gryffindor, you know, having famous parents and all that jazz. And that prat Scorpius going to Slytherin. I don't think anything is going to bode well for the poor helpless students he decides to bully. :p
Anyway, I did like this chapter but there were some grammar things that you might want to look at but otherwise, I like the pacing and the characters very much! Also! Your staff is interesting! I never would have thought of having Parvati Patil as a teacher. :p I sort of overlooked her for some reason but I haven't seen it very much! So, good job! Anyway, I also enjoyed Wooki Walter! Hahah, Star Wars fan are you? :D I'll be back and look forward to more from my Albus and his Misfit friends in...two or three days, depending. Until then!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Welcome back Gabbie!!
I love how stories are light and casual, then something odd or tragic happens. :D So I am really happy to have done a good job.

Also, my grammar sucks. badly. I have got a beta though, so it should be better.

Please come back soon!
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