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Review:caoty says:
Hey, I'm here from tag.

So I admit I prepared for the worst when I saw that there's time travel in this fic. I'm sure you know what it's like - there are so many cliches associated with this mind of plot that, generally, the most prudent course of action would be to avoid it altogether. However, you've done a good job with making this opening stand out; it's interesting, it creates a hell of a lot of suspense and unanswered questions - so well done with that.

The opening sentence could've done with a comma in there somewhere, but apart from that, I think it's fine.

One last thing before I go: Roxanne's a bit darker than brunette, don't you think? Considering she's half black.

Anyway, good luck writing! :)

Author's Response: Hello and thank you so much for reviewing, though I'm sorry that it took so long to answer life got in the way.

I know what you mean. There are a lot of cliches in these kind of plots and I hope I will steer away from the negative cliches ( seeing nowadays almost everything is a cliche). I'm glad you think so!

I will look into it.

Well I agree with you actually but in my mind for this story. Roxanne dyes her hair. I mean dying ones hair is quite common and is something I don't see that much in fanfic. Though perhaps it was a bit abstract here it was what I meant with it

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