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Review:adoranymph says:
another awesome chapter! :D i really loved the part with the Whomping Willow and how you weaved that and the bit with Davey Gudgeon into it. and how you have it set up so that Sirius for example is leery of any kid who's been bitten by Fenrir Greyback. this is going to make for a very exciting reveal when they finally figure out that Remus is not only a werewolf, but one of the kids bitten by Fenrir! *gasp*

and then poor Remus, how scared he was before his first full moon and how he just wanted his parents. i wanted to just reach in and give him a hug, the poor kid. :(

i also liked how Sirius is concerned about his brother's future as a member of the Black family, how they don't start out as estranged, but rather Sirius playing the older brother looking out for Regulus. Now I'm going to be sad when they part ways!

despite all this sadness and drama, it just made it for a very wonderful chapter! now i can't wait for the aftermath of this first full moon, and all that will come in the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks a million for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked the Davy Gudgeon bit (he will feature again later - hint, hint).

I am also glad you picked up on the Fenrir Greyback sub-plot, I have a lot of stuff planned with that. They won't find out until second year that he is a werewolf, and it will be later on again when they find out he was bitten by Greyback.

I am glad you liked the first full-moon at Hogwarts. I was worried that it was a little bit too much. But that was the effect I was going for, wanting the reader to just give Remus a hug.

I am also glad you like the relationship between Regulus and Sirius. I always thought that they weren't always estranged. I think the big change in their relationship starts when Sirius leaves for Hogwarts and gets sorted into Gryffindor. Regulus is just left at home and Sirius isn't there to protect him anymore.

Thanks so much again for the review, more to come, don't worry! I can't wait for more Moonlight myself!


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