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Review:SereneChaos says:
Ah, so it is after DH! I like how you put that information in there without having to say it outright. I do think that Luna's character sounds a I almost expect her to be a little more dreamy the way she is in the books, and since you mentioned the passing of her father in the first chapter, I might like to see how that affects her now. I think you do a good job writing Dean though (especially when he's talking to Seamus!).

One little thing to look out for is the punctuation that goes in your quotes. Make sure to include it! :) Otherwise, good job and good luck with the rest of your writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I will take into account all you said and I will develop their characters more as I get into the story. It's nice to know someone appreciates my work, so thanks again!

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