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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
This was really well written! The description in this was just amazing and really had me able to picture everything you wrote! I loved seeing this from both pov's and thought that you started this off absolutetly wonderfullly! I do hope that you write more about these two and their relationship which is very complicated. I loved how you talked about all of the letters that Albus had sent him and how he seemed to take great care of putting them away! I only found a couple of small mistakes the first being here: "Without looking, he folds it in two, not bothering to make sure the edges line up, letting them cross other each other" that first other should be over. I think there had only been one other small mistake that I had seen but nothing too huge! Great Job!


Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was so nervous about taking something like this on - mostly because, as you said, their relationship is so complicated and tragic in a way, so seemed a really daunting task. It still does, actually, lol. I'll definitely write more - second chapter is well under way and should hopefully be up soon if all goes well! :) Ooh, I'll definitely take a second look at it and get rid of that mistake - thanks for pointing it out!

Thanks for the great review!

Aph xx

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