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Review:shemadethesunsmile says:
Wow, this is great.
Not that that's a huge surprise, seeing as all your chapters are pretty amazing. But this was really, really good. I love your writing style, and the plot is so good... I really, really liked the way you portrayed everyone - especially Severus was great here, though Lily and James were really impressive. Even though I know Sirius is going to tell Snape, I feel so disappointed in him every time he does, in every Marauder's era fic I read centered around that time. (Other than that, I really love Sirius.) Anyways, thank you so much for writing this, it's amazing!

Author's Response: Hello, and thank you! I always love it when a faithful reader comes out of the woodwork to review, since it happens so rarely :)

It's great that you like my characterization. I think that's the part I've worked hardest on in this story. I've especially put work into Severus, since I have a tendency to write him as being a bit more decent than he probably deserves, and James, who I've always had a bit of a bias against. If they came across fairly, though, that's lovely! I have to agree with you about Sirius--I adore him, but only when he's not being awful to poor Severus. It was tough to write Snape just falling easily into Sirius's trap, too.

Thanks so much for your review, and I hope to hear from you again when this is updated!

-Amanda :)


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