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Review:javct says:
javct45 here with your requested review.

This was really poignant; I'm not really sure why, it just was :P I found Christie really cute and adult!Harry was just adorable.

I do, however, have a few small things to point out.

Who is Amy? Is she a OC, because, this is a suggestion but because of your small amount of characters (four) I think that the story would be more engaging for Christie's mother to be canon character that the readers can relate to. Also, how old is Christie? because she seems very advanced in her speech for a young girl (although, I am imaging her to three or four)

There were also a few grammatical, punctation and spelling mistakes. Nothing a good once-over couldn't fix.

Jasmine, x

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