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Review:javct says:
javct45 here with your requested review!

I really enjoyed this! I liked the style of this: as an open letter. It's really interesting.

I'm curious: where James and Sirus actually... together or not? Because he mentions how they held hands but it never actually states if they are "in love" (hmm, *thinks deeply and cleverly, which of course fails because I am in no state of mind to think deeply and cleverly*). I like the way that is puts Severus in the story for like, a line (SNILY FTW!); I wonder if Lily and Sev where ever "together" (if you know what I mean *hint hint nudge nudge*).

My poor ship! Jily! I don't know what I feel about James/Lily right now. You have given me confusing feelings about Jily and snily! (Do you know how hard it is loving two ships at the same time!)

On your comment on "James being Jamesy enough" I think you did a good job. Honestly, it took me a while to really warm up to the way this is written (seeing inside James' head because, let's face it, the Marauders aren't really written as being deep and meaningful) but after I re-read a second time i really liked it. It's really nice to see inside his head and see what he is thinking.

I really enjoyed it and I'm also sorry if this review makes no sense: i'm really tired haha :P
Jasmine, x

Author's Response: Hey there! :D

The style was a bit of a happy accident tbh: what happens, apparently, when caoty starts writing without thinking too hard.

You know what, I have absolutely no idea. I don't think even James knows, and he was there at the time. Their relationship is infinitely complicated, even without shipping.
I don't ship Snily - then again, I don't ship James/Sirius either, so make of that what you will. ;)

It's weird 'cause Lily/James is my second favourite ship in the entire fandom, and it was kind of heartbreaking writing this.
But no, I don't know what it's like shipping the same person with two people who completely hate each other at the same time. :P

I'm one of those people who thinks that the Marauders should absolutely be written as being deep and meaningful as well as humorously, so I'm glad you warmed up to that part.

Thank you so much for your review. :D

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