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Review:IceCubism says:
Fantastic story. I love it so much! You're so awesome for writing this and I like all the graphic descriptions - you're really wicked at writing.

I can't wait to read the next chapters, but I'm filled with some sort of apprehension and dread... Well, because we all know what's going to happen, don't we?

I'm so sad for Gwen... I can't believe it, Sirius and her were going to marry and Sirius... died. I can't imagine how she'll feel...

But I'd like to see how you write her emotions as she's protecting Harry. Will she become conflicted as Sirius was put into danger? I wonder whether she'd choose to protect Sirius or Harry...

I think it'd be great if you wrote a Sirius POV of his last moments before he fell through the veil. Of his emotions, of how he felt for Gwen, knowing he'd die. And maybe what happened when he entered the veil. I'm so curious about that!

So anyway, great story and please update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I loved reading your thoughts, and I was actually kind of planning on doing the Sirius POV thing :) Glad you're enjoying it!

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