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Review:ohmymerlin says:
I love reading your work! It's so confusing and all over the place! It's so good!

The fourth paragraph was amazing! I could just imagine Sirius and Remus talking so quickly and freaking out how fast James' life went. I loved the run-on sentences with the continuous use of a naughty word because it gets the point across, blunt and truthful.

My FAVOURITE sentence:

"The most beautiful woman in the world makes the tea now; a little lukewarm this time, he reflects as he sips it at four in the morning, but at least there is an absence of smashed china."

I don't know why, but the "absence of smashed china" just really tugged at my heart. It was almost like the smashed china was a reflection of Remus, I think?

Oh good lord, I'm becoming an English nut who analyses everything!

Anyway, this one-shot was extremely well-written! I absolutely loved it! :D

10/10!

Author's Response: Hey! :D

Thanks so much! That was the sentence I had the most fun writing, and it doesn't work for a lot of people, but I'm really glad you appreciate it.
Though I think the continuous use of a naughty word is just my filthy mouth being inherited by my characters. xD

I write stuff to be analysed because I'm weird like that. But the china could represent any of the three: Remus, Tonks or Sirius. Maybe. I don't know, I just write these things.
BUT ANYWAY - that sentence gets a bit drowned out by the one just before it, so I'm really glad it stood out to you.

Thank you so much for your lovely review!


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