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Review:CassiePotter says:
Gabbie, this was phenomenal! Oh my goodness, I loved every second of it, and I cant even form coherent thoughts right now. Ah that was amazing. And the writing was gorgeous, and the imagery was fantastic, and I could picture every little thing that happened in this chapter.
Woo. Now that my thoughts are a bit more together, I'll tell you something useful, shall I? :) I think right away we get a really good, strong sense of how Astoria's decision to leave home is really catching up to her, now that she's been caught by Helena. She's realizing the enormity of what she's done, especially because she's with Blaise, and because her family will do nasty things to get her back.
Also, the chemistry between Blaise and Astoria is almost tangible. It's so, so incredibly strong, and I love how we're just hit with it! And so are they, but they aren't really sure how to react.
I loved the little line about Blaise being a potions teacher in the future! Haha, if Astoria only knew!
This was honestly fabulous, and I will definitely give you much more love and praise for this on forums! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Its always great to hear from you! You always leave me such nice reviews and you make me blush, saying all these things! How do I react to this?!
Anyway, I had so many different things in store for this chapter and I just couldn't get it right until the last minute. I was going to post the chapter I had done but reread it and didn't like it so I decided on this one. :D
I'm so glad that you liked it and could picture what was going on! I never think I do that good of a job on that aspect of my writing.
Astoria's decision means everything and carried this entire chapter, which is why its called "Fear", not only because she has to go back to her family but because she obviously doesn't want to leave Blaise. Its not over though, she's made a terrible mistake and her family will not be understanding. Just as a warning. >:D
Ah, the chemistry between Astoria and Blaise...
I try my hardest to get it just right because there are things Blaise will say and do that Draco of course would never even consider. And that makes a huge difference on his interaction with his prickly little cactus. Hehehe.
I'm not sure if they're the type of couple to react to such strong attraction and there's so much that they're not telling each other. Hm. I'll have to get on to revealing some of those things! >:D
What? I don't need anymore praise and such on the forums, I'm quite fine with all the lovely reviews you give me here! :D And I'm incredibly shy...its a flaw of mine when it comes to my writing. :p
But thanks so much for coming back! This chapter bumped up quite a bit from yesterday too, you guys are gobbling this stuff up! ;)
Can't wait for TFD and more of Darcy and my dear Louis! Don't be a tease and not update immediately!
Much love,

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