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Review:Debra20 says:
Hey Ciara. I'm just randomly popping here with a review :)

When I first read the summary to this one shot never did I imagine it could turn out to be something like this. So deep. So emotional. So subtle. I can't even begin to genuinely express my awe at how marvelous this story was to me.

Peter is a really underdeveloped character. In many Marauder stories he is forgotten, just a background character with no lines and sometimes even completely cut out from the story. He's nowhere to be found. That's why I rejoice every time I find a story about him. More so when it's a beautifully written one, like yours. His emotions are so raw, so deep, I was truly shaken. Enveloped in your amazing use of words, his personality came to life more than in any other story I've read about him. He seemed so real...so human. His descent into darkness was masterfully handled. I especially appreciated your idea that he never really intended to betray them (contrary to popular belief) and that he regretted it. But you captured his cowardly essence so perfectly that the passage didn't seem forced at all. The last scene, with him lying in bed and crying over what he did, how his last hope of redeeming himself dissipates is just heart wrenching. I never imagined him as a cold, treacherous human being, who planned his betrayal in detail. I've always imagined that mostly he got swept off his feet. That he just...went with the current.

I admit that I haven't really read another story written with this style (second person) before but there is something there, very special, that I feel makes this style perfect for Peter's story. It gave me the feeling that the speaking voice was his unconscious. I kind of like imagined him sitting in front of a mirror with his reflection talking back to him, spilling his innermost thoughts and feelings.

I really can't praise you enough for this story! Loved it to bits. This is canon material for me regarding Peter

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