Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
This was a very cute one-shot, very fluffy! :)
I loved how it wasn't a big action scene, it wasn't a huge deal, it just was and I think that's what made it so good! It was something that could happen to anyone (except the house elves and that :P) and that made it even sweeter, the fact that it was so relatable. I loved the characterisation as well, they acted like normal teenagers would and I love the last line, it wraps things up really nicely! :)
A really nice piece, so cute! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you found it relateable, except the invisibility cloak too lol. I thought it was really important to characterize them like that, some people almost make it like mini adults, but they're still growing up.
So many people compliment on the last line! I'm very happy with that, if a story ends, and readers love how it ends, that's a big accomplishment for a writer.
Thanks for a great review hun :)

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 411
Submit Report: