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Review:Owlpost68 says:
Aw, I really liked this. Very cute and fluffy, which I'm all about lol. One thing though, why exactly did she think he didn't feel the same? was it just that he never tried talking to her about it, and since she stopped going and never heard from him assume he didn't like her? and vice versa? It might be a good idea to make that a little clearer, we can guess, but it's nice to know a little back story, unless it was part of your novel in which case telling where people can find that out would be good, and shameless advertising lol.
Anyway, I thought you had both their characters pegged, same awkward sweet pair we know them to be :)

Oh, and just one typo:
“So, how's you?” She called through to the living room.

I think you must have meant 'how're you?' but that was it, so easy fix.

Happy first review!!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! :)
I'm glad you liked it, cute stuff is the best. I'll have a look through and add in some extra detail/ check over for any errors.
Thanks again for reviewing! :)

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