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Review:kandekisses says:
Hey hun! First off I have to say the name of the story, banner and chapter image are all beautiful! Makes for a very intriguing start.

Man you really have me hooked now. Your descriptions really make it feel as though you're watching it instead of reading. &You were also able to fit a lot of background with not that much dialogue which was great.

I'm assuming that the character you introduced us to was James? But I could be wrong. I wonder what types of things he will deliver for them. Doesn't sound like a pleasant job so far.

One thing that caught my eye was that in the sentence "He needed to money, regardless of how it was earned." Instead of "to" it should be "the". =)

Also I love that this is influenced by Moulin Rouge! One of my favorites. My thread is up now so definitely drop by when the next chapter is out!

Very nice prologue my dear!

Author's Response: Giola and mixer did a wonderful job on the banner and CI, didn't they? I got so excited when I saw them! I had issues coming up with an original name for the story, but I'm glad you like it. It was something I was worried about. :/

Haha, thanks. It's so different for me - writing in a different historical era - but it's a good challenge, and it helps with my writing. That said, I'm constantly paranoid that I've over done it, or missed something and it doesn't make sense. I'm glad to hear that it's got you hooked though. That makes me very happy. ^_^

Haha, can't tell you that - spoilers and all :P You'll have to wait and see. No, it's not a pleasant job at all, but desperate times call for desperate measures.

Oops. I'll fix that up ASAP. Cheers for pointing that out. :)

I'll pop by when I finally upload the next chapter. Thanks again for the lovely review. It's very appreciated. ^_^

- Adele :)

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