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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here! Finally, right! Haha! I'm glad that you gave me the first chapter of the Slytherin collab to read. I wanted to participate but alas, no time and too many WIPs. I'll settle to just reviewing though! :)

I have to be honest...I was immediately sucked right into your writing style. It happens once in a while, but your description, flow and detail made me really like your style. I really like how you give us little detail which makes me want to keep on reading to find out what is going on and what's going to happen to your characters.

This Kevin guy...he sounds like a real class act. Haha! However I have a question. You said that there was a bit of sunlight so why would Kevin say something about detention? Shouldn't it be dinner time or close to it? In my own honest opinion I always thought students should be in their common room around 8pm. But the way you wrote it, it feels to me that Matthew is sneaking around the castle.

I really liked this! There's more to being a Slytherin. We're not evil...just ambitious about what we want and are willing to do what needs to get done to achieve it. This is definitely a nice start for the collaboration.

Thanks for the read!

--Rosie

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