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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Wow! I thought that this was a great beginning to your story and I do hope that you continue to write it as I think you have some interesting characters on your hand and a great idea! I've never seen sleep walking adding into a story before so that really adds an interesting element to this one and I can see that it will make for some rather funny encounters such as her one with James! I wonder what James had been up to that had him leaving the ravenclaw tower? I couldn't spot any mistakes in this chapter so great job on that! I did want to say though at one point you have James say something, then the next thing being said is also by him (when he asks if she was meeting up with a bf) but the two things are on different lines so it makes it a bit confusing as to who is actually talking. (if that even makes any sense). Altogether though, this was a great beginning, seemed really funny, and it has lots of promise for whats to come! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hi and thank you for the review!

I'm really glad you liked the beginning of the story. I'll check out that line. Thank you for pointing it out. =)


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